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God did not create
Man in his image; we create
God to be in ours.
:icontanashai:
GAAAHHH!! I had to turn:
God did not create man in his image
Man created God in ours.
into something that was a poem-namely a Haiku and it was a pain! I'm still not sure about it...

And what's the deal with the preview images?!?
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:icontanashai:
~Tanashai Feb 5, 2010  Professional Writer
lol
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:iconwebleedrainbows:
best haiku i've read in so, so long. this is exactly what i think, man has shaped god to their own wishes, to tell them what they want to hear, what they think they should be, and never what they really are, because nobody is what mankind wants us to be. if we aren't fantastic people, we're scorned by others who see themselves as doing gods wish, and being perfect in his eyes. and his eyes are really their own, they'll just not strong enough to will this way of life for themselves, they have to be taught it in a way that makes sense.

TL;DR this was amazing.
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~Tanashai Feb 3, 2010  Professional Writer
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you very much! And I'm glad that you got so much out of it; this poem has done it's job if it's touched you in such a way! :D
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:iconnathanaelwolff:
I have no idea what's the deal with the preview images O__o"

And... I already knew that saying ;p Although it's a good idea to put it in haiku form XD
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~Tanashai Feb 3, 2010  Professional Writer
Yeah, I can't remember who said it though... but it sounds nice in a poem too, lol
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